Behind the Scenes: Editing Great Basin National Park Storyline

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How Long Does It Take to Write a Storyline?

Teachers often ask me, “How long does it take to write a storyline?” Well, here’s the thing. It varies and as a teacher, I’m sure you know that a lesson/curriculum is never “done.” Alas, this is the beginning of editing (and upgrading) Great Basin National Park (GBNP) storyline. 

And to be clear, this is more about editing the completed GBNP storyline than creating it. That’s for a different post.

The Trip That Started It All

I first visited GBNP in 2018. It was a last minute addition to a month long Canada/north west United States road trip. Here’s the thing about GBNP, you have to travel through the middle of nowhere and I mean nowhere to get there. It’s the kind of location where you really need to make sure you have enough gas because there are literally no options for long spans of desert road.

So, why travel all the way to GBNP?

For starters, it’s home to the oldest known living individual tree, named Methuselah. It’s a bristlecone tree and they’re pretty adapted to living in harsh, high altitude conditions.

A Night Sky That Stuck With Me

But what really caught my eye and left a memorable impact was the night sky.

Remember, GBNP is in the middle of nowhere, which is ideal for a great night sky. I’ve seen some incredible night skies in Texas, the Andes Mountains in Chile, and Joshua Tree National Park, but GBNP rivals the best of them.

And that is probably why the Great Basin Observatory made its home within the park. It’s the only national park with a research-grade observatory. GNBP is also recognized by Dark Sky International as a premier International Dark Sky Park.

So maybe the storyline started then, with that unplanned visit in 2018. 

Teaching Space

The great thing about being assigned to teach a freshman astronomy class, is that students come in already loving space. They want to learn more about what is out there, how our planet came to exist, and how do we learn about things that are so far away!

Over the years, I led fun, hands-on lessons about the Big Bang, modeling constellations, and create scale Earth-moon-sun models. The individual lessons were fine-tuned over the years, but they lacked the intentional cohesion of a storyline that begins with a phenomenon and works to answer students’ questions.

Writing the Storyline

When brainstorming how this storyline would begin, my mind kept taking me back to viewing the night sky at GBNP. I just knew.

How could the national park that hosts an annual astronomy festival not be the center of this phenomenon?

GBNP was the first space-centered storyline I’ve written. Even with an eager audience, there’s A LOT of information about space to share with students. That meant A LOT of research, along with plenty of double- and triple-checking, went into developing lessons that are not only engaging, but rigorous and focused on understanding rather than memorization.

Images showing the Great Basin National Park night sky and activities in the storyline.
A peek into Great Basin National Park activities and the night sky.

Although I had been teaching astronomy for about six years, it wasn’t until 2025 when I really buckled down and organized GBNP storyline. It was released and ready for the world in April 2025.

So, I suppose you could say writing this storyline was a compilation of seven years of real-world experience, classroom practice, and research.

Editing Upgrading Great Basin NP Storyline

Getting back to the part where lessons are never done; it’s 2026 and time to take the feedback and new ideas and get to editing Great Basin NP. I keep saying “edit,” but it’s actually more than that. GBNP is getting digital alternatives for every lesson, Big Idea and Vocabulary trackers, and a stations review lesson. And that’s just for the students. Teachers will have lab support videos, facilitation tips in the newly formatted teacher guide, and quick PD videos based on teacher FAQs.

Editing Great Basin Goals:

This round of edits upgrades includes the following goals:

    • Incorporate updated resources and new lessons
    • Ensure NGSS alignment
    • Fix any silly mistakes, e.g. grammar, typos (Because I’m human 😆)
    • Improve ease of use for teachers and students

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Editing Great Basin: The Tabs, Checklists, and Brain Dumps

There are SO many moving pieces involved in a storyline.

Of course, there are the published pieces that you (the teachers) see:

  • Teacher guide
  • Supplemental slides
  • Student worksheets
  • Printable lab and activity materials
  • Quizzes and tests
  • Answer keys

But then there is all of the behind-the-scenes “stuff” that you never see. Some of that “stuff” is used in the initial planning phase (like performance expectation cards, but more on those another day), some of it only ever lives in my brain, much of it gets scrapped or saved for later, and then there are the organization pieces. I love me some Google Sheets for this part!

The Spreadsheet That Runs the Entire Storyline

Each storyline gets its own Google Sheet. I use the same template every time. This spreadsheet lives as a permanent tab on my browser throughout the entire process. It’s the giant checklist that keeps track of what’s completed, what needs to be started, and what details still need to be wrapped up. It’s also where I keep all of the components of each bundled performance expectation easily accessible.

Google spreadsheet for editing Great Basin storyline.
The most important Google Sheet in all of editing Great Basin NP storyline.

The main sheet is the checklist. Then the other sheets (shown by the tabs along the bottom) are reserved for each performance expectation, broken down in detail.

Let’s start with the performance expectation tabs. The performance expectation itself, each specific dimension within it, and most importantly, the observable features are all housed on these sheets. To find this information for yourself, search using a PE code (like HS-ESS1-2) along with “evidence statement.” The evidence statement piece is the key to finding the observable features connected to that performance expectation.

Great Basin planning Google Sheet that shows HS-ESS1-1 evidence statement
Each evidence statement in the storyline gets its own tab.

Organized Chaos, But Make It Color-Coded

Back to the main sheet, the coveted checklist. All of the pieces that go out to teachers are coordinated for each lesson on this sheet.

Each storyline is divided into three sets, indicated by the colors pink, green, and purple. Assessments are gray. That’s not a rule about storylines, but it is a style I’ve developed over the years. It works out well to pause for a quiz or project after each set.

The GBNP storyline sets include:

  • Our Sun
  • All of the Stars
  • Beyond the Milky Way

The most rewarding part of the checklist is putting the “x” in the box. When an aspect of a lesson is completed (like the teacher guide or printable lab materials) and that “x” is entered, the box turns a darker shade of its original color. It feels just as good as crossing something off a to-do list.

It’s all thanks to the magic of conditional formatting. I set a rule (for example, text that is exactly “x”), and when that rule is “met” the box changes colors. Watching the sheet light up box by box feels like seeing a piece of art come together.

As part of the upgrades, a new column was added for GBNP storyline planning: Digital. I can’t wait for you to see that column start lighting up!

And then there’s the notes column. It’s my place to hold partially developed ideas, links to websites, articles, and anything else I’m not quite ready to use yet.

Or maybe I never use them.

How Teacher Feedback Shapes the Storylines

What sets Teacher on a Trip apart from other big-name curriculum companies?

Not only are the lessons written and tested by a teacher, but one of the biggest pieces is the communication with teachers. I love the community that has been built throughout the years. There are teachers I’ve eventually met in person after years of interacting through Facebook and email.

In the classroom, when several students have the same question, you know it’s time to rework the lesson. Same situation when I hear similar requests from teachers for clarification or feedback. It’s time to rework the lesson, the teacher guide, or the lesson activity materials.

Some of these upgrades came directly from teacher feedback:

  • A place for students to track what they’ve learned
  • Review at the end of the storyline
  • Vocabulary tracking
  • Digital alternatives for all storylines
  • More accessible materials list in the teacher guide

Naturally, I needed another spreadsheet for this task.

Google Spreadsheet for storyline upgrades
Storyline upgrades are tracked on this Google Sheet.

The main tab keeps track of all curriculum upgrades for each storyline. One thing I love about this organization system is that I can leave notes about what still needs to be completed in each box or reminders for things I need to come back to later. Then, when it’s all finished, the same magic “x” completion system is used on this spreadsheet too.

Did you peep those other tabs at the bottom?

  • Lab videos
  • Mini-PD videos
  • Additional resources

I’ll let you in on those further down the line.

To stay on pace for the release of the upgrades, I’m using a batching strategy, which has been shown to be more productive in the long run. I literally “batch” similar projects together and knock them out one after another.

I’m editing each storyline and creating digital alternatives as I go. I also keep track of which labs to prioritize for support videos. Same with the Mini-PD videos, especially as questions about three-dimensional learning have come up over the years.

Once all of the storyline edits and digital alternatives are completed, I’ll finish filming all of the videos.

For videos, the batching strategy is especially helpful because my home office gets transformed into a filming studio complete with lights, microphones, and a tripod.

The “Don’t Forget This Later” Document

You know those ideas that pop into your head when you’re about to fall asleep or while driving?

I toss all of those into this document and don’t think about them again until editing time rolls back around.

If you’ve ever sent me an email with a suggested website or a way that you presented an activity and I told you I’m adding it to my notes, this is where it goes. It lives in this document until it’s time to update the storyline again.

Honestly, I highly recommend this method for your classroom too. Keep a running log of updates and ideas to revisit when future you has more time.

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